writing goals 1. be sure to have a clear thesis that contains the topic and an opinion 2. use examples and give reasons for opinions 3. limit the use of pronouns
Wednesday, May 11, 2011
Clouds
When i was a young boy i used to always stare at the clouds and try to make figures out of them. Clouds are white, puffy, and very high up in the air. I wish i could be up in the air like them. I love flying. When i was about 4 years old, me and my older brother went on a plane by ourselves going to visit my grandma in North Carolina. We flew through a bunch of clouds. At first, I thought they would break off and just split into two but it turns out clouds are basically just water.
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